Wednesday, August 17, 2011

As I walked further into the rain…..


The same misty night
filled with the same solitude,
same rain and freezing sight
all coming to you to occlude;

And I felt the same pain,
as I walked further into the rain.


Some finds as stunning
some says it’s lovely,
I only count old pieces deep inside
with a touch of being lonely;

And I kept presuming another reason,
as I walked further into the rain.


The breaking of nerves
with every stroke of raindrops,
and a burst of tears
losing its way but never stops;

And I crossed that entire molten scene,
as I walked further into the rain.


The warmth of released pain
the limits of your courage,
everything is just between
me and this silent maze;

And I witnessed this moment of season,
as I walked further into the rain.

11 comments:

  1. Some finds as stunning
    some says it’s lovely,
    I only count old pieces deep inside
    with a touch of being lonely;...

    rain and lonliness ... both have created a wonderful thought in the form of this poem ..

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  2. so nice post,thanks


    कृपया मेरे ब्लॉग पर भी पधारें.

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  3. deep and touching poetry..... good one

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  4. Wish you a very very happy new year,Vandana.

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  5. मकर संक्रांति की हार्दिक शुभकामनाएँ|

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  6. NICE LINES WITH HEART TOUCHING
    EMOTIONS AND FEELINGS

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