The same misty night
filled with the same solitude,
filled with the same solitude,
same rain and freezing sight
all coming to you to occlude;
And I felt the same pain,
as I walked further in the rain.
Some finds as stunning
some says it’s lovely,
I only count old pieces deep inside
with a touch of being lonely;
And I kept presuming another reason,
as I walked further in the rain.
The breaking of nerves
with every stroke of raindrops,
and a burst of tears
losing its way but never stops;
And I crossed that entire molten scene,
as I walked further in the rain.
The warmth of released pain
the limits of your courage,
everything is just between
me and this silent maze;
And I witnessed this moment of season,
as I walked further in the rain.
Beautiful!!!!
ReplyDeletethank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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nice...
ReplyDeleteSome finds as stunning
ReplyDeletesome says it’s lovely,
I only count old pieces deep inside
with a touch of being lonely;...
rain and lonliness ... both have created a wonderful thought in the form of this poem ..
so nice post,thanks
ReplyDeleteकृपया मेरे ब्लॉग पर भी पधारें.
deep and touching poetry..... good one
ReplyDeletegd one.........
ReplyDeletenice work
Wish you a very very happy new year,Vandana.
ReplyDeleteमकर संक्रांति की हार्दिक शुभकामनाएँ|
ReplyDeleteNICE LINES WITH HEART TOUCHING
ReplyDeleteEMOTIONS AND FEELINGS
Beautiful composition.
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