What if our hearts act as none other than a cigarette, which is rolled up with emotions instead of tobacco? Burning of emotions is a real pain, but the two utmost questions arise when a cigarette is lighted up: what causes it to get ignited and how it will be stopped? Obviously we know the answers in case of a cigarette: one is a lighter and another is a butt to stop it from burning any more. Then why we could not able to define answers to ourselves, when an emotion starts burning inside us? Certainly, it can be some things or some people or sometimes we only, who act as a lighter for these emotions. No matter who lit it up, we always have a stopper and that butt is TIME.
very nice post !
ReplyDeletethanks!
Nice thoughts!
ReplyDeleteTruly said ...
ReplyDeleteTime is the only big healer ...
thanx to all for their encouraging words......
ReplyDeletewonderful comparison. Never thought like this. This small piece of prose is in fact a piece of poetry in blank verse ...
ReplyDelete"What if
Our hearts act
as none other than
a cigarette,
rolled up
with emotions
instead of tobacco?
Burning of emotions
is a real pain,
but
the two utmost questions arise
when a cigarette is lighted up:
what causes it to get ignited
and how it will be stopped?
Obviously
we know the answers
in case of a cigarette:
one is a lighter
and another is a butt
to stop it from burning any more.
Then why
we could not able to
define answers to ourselves,
when an emotion
starts burning inside us?
Certainly,
it can be some things
or some people or
sometimes we only,
who act as a lighter for
these emotions.
No matter who lit it up,
we always have
a stopper and
that butt is
TIME."
I have just rearranged them . good luck to you vandana .
oh!!!!!!! now i am really surprised by ur creativity sir!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletethanx for making these few lines into a beautiful poem....... hats off to u!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You have compared heart with cigraette, nice.
ReplyDeletePlease,compare it with a lotus also ,which blossoms with rising sun.Normally, in our shastra also it is called 'hirday kamal'.It would give pious feelings instead of burning and stopping emotions like a cigratette.
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Really Nice
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Rakejh ji, i totally agreed with ur view too. a lotus with rsing sun, nice thoghts. thanx for coming!
ReplyDeleteWell Said!
ReplyDeleteYou have a very good imagination! Loved reading your comparison. WOW!!
nice thoughts and seems to be very nice post
ReplyDeletegreat thoughts and good post too...
ReplyDeletegood one................
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written . A million dollar question to ponder on.
ReplyDeleteinteresting:)
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